For a nation to consider Arts a complete liability on a Nations budget is inappropriate, there are many beneficial aspects of arts even for poor nations to continue funding it. Arts can be of many forms, it can either theater, fine arts, fashion, acting, and
singing etc.
Humans can't live happy lives by only feeding them their biological needs and ignoring the psychological necessities and it goes
without saying that arts play a vital role in bringing happiness and entertainment in society. A society can't be groomed and developed without developing a nice sense to appreciate arts.
Assuming that Arts is always a burden on a national budget is not an appealing idea, in most of the cases industrial arts can generate revenue worth millions. Let's put the example of the movie industry in India or Hollywood, these are billion dollar industries and are generating not only millions of dollars for the country but also creating opportunities for society. Though these industries initially were dependent upon government aids, now these are self-sustaining and progressive. Also, it helps to convey a positive message to society.
Arts, especially fine arts also not only creates but elevates the soft image of the country and develops a sense of natural beauty in a country which results in the boost of tourism and it will ultimately ensure economic benefits for the nation.
Though the fact can't be ignored that if the Nation even doesn't have resources to spend on higher priority objectives like to bring food to its citizen then it the budget may be scaled down but arguments to continue investing on arts are strong to not suspend the budget.
In the current world of globalization, a nation funding in arts and engaging proper talent would not waste its budget instead it will generate revenue from it so nation shall continue funding arts and make reforms to make it effective for the country.
- Nowadays many people following fashion trends and think that it’s very important. Is it a good or bad development? Include reasons and examples from your personal experience. 56
- Nations should suspend government funding for the arts when significant numbers of their citizens are hungry or unemployed.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning f 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 319.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03134796238 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72650153043 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567398119122 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.3769073696 60.3974514979 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.909090909 118.986275619 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 23.4991977007 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 5.21951772744 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152828858918 0.243740707755 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546534252945 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470894529025 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0708030186511 0.150359130593 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400793747995 0.0667264976115 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 14.1392134831 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 48.8420337079 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.38706741573 114% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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