You are looking for a part-time job at a football club.
Write a letter to the manager of the football club. In your letter,
introduce yourself
explain what experience and special skills you have
tell him/her when you think you could start
Dear Sir,
I am writing to you to apply my candidacy for a part-time profession in your football club. I am James Robert- a member of "Star Buz" football teen-age team, New Jersey. As I am really fond of football I would like to work at your place along with my studies to keep connected myself with my passion.
Moreover, I am delighted to work at the place which makes me overwhelmed wherever I am surrounded by it. I have worked on "Neonz Club" as a Football trainer for six months and have proficiency in dealing with the students, motivating them, communication skills, making them aware regarding win-win approach and more.
Therefore, It will be great if I would be given this opportunity so that I can prove my skills and capabilities. Furthermore, I am willing to join the job from next week itself. Let me know your thoughts for the same.
I am waiting for your favorable response,
Thanks and Regards,
James
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...os; football teen-age team, New Jersey. As I am really fond of football I would li...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, really, regarding, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 795.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8773006135 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92243563789 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668711656442 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0240555716 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3333333333 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 4.34317383033 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166826857294 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701283723853 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821791111282 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0928356343951 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588244909646 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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