If a product is good or it meets people's needs, people will buy it. Advertising is no more than a form of entertainment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some argue that using advertisement has little to no impact on promoting a product on the market as customers purchase when a good quality product satisfies their needs and requirement. In my opinion, I believe that adverts still take on an important role in the sales industry for some reasons.
Indeed, items can be sold easily for its quality and individuals’ needs. For example, people purchase merchandises such as food, bathroom towels or toothbrush from the local market because these products are essential for their daily use. After the first time trying, people will undoubtedly buy the item again if it is great and functional. This shows that common products on the market can have the sales without the assistance from advertisement.
Unfortunately, many products still seriously need advertisement in order to attract customers’ attention. Firstly, newly invented devices which assist people greatly in many aspects in their daily basis such as house-cleaning robot, electric toothbrush and smartphone are still unknown to a large proportion of adults. This slows down the sales of these useful products. Therefore, commercial companies have to step in and make these accessories more appealing to customers by creating eye-catching adverts and massive establishing all means of media. Secondly, since there is a plethora of the same products from multiple manufacturers these days, there is no chance for small companies to compete with bigger ones. Thus, the only solution for these corporations is to seek help from advertisement.
In conclusion, while it is true to say that people buy products for their needs and items’ quality, I believe that the role of advertisement is still undeniable in the competitive sales environment.
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| 2018-07-26 | Anila Stephen | 61 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44363636364 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11360650284 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5485881436 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.153846154 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3846153846 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183335424295 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641392924364 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524697469011 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122231849671 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336606760117 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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