Increasing gradually of sea levels has been proven to be closely related to Green House Effect which is a significant threat to human beings. This essay will firstly, discuss one of the main problems that more and more serious flooding has happened recently and it leads to fatal damages to houses and properties and even risking human lives, and secondly, talk about one of the main solutions is to build flooding barriers especially in the low level region in order to minimize or prevent the risks from flooding.
Global warming has evidently resulted in many harmful natural disasters, one of which is undoubtedly flooding. Flooding is caused by rising of sea levels since huge areas of iceberg are melting due to increasing temperature all over the world. As a result, houses and properties near the shore are significantly devastated and most of the time human fatalities occur in the incidents. For example, the serious flooding happened in the southern-east of Asia in the early 21st century, which caused a terrible damage to many countries in this region such as Thailand, Indonesia, the Philippines and so on; moreover, hundreds of people were killed in this flooding and it caused over hundreds of millions dollars of economic loss.
One effective solution to this problem is to construct flooding barriers in the low altitude regions. Flooding barriers should be built at the height which is tall enough to overcome the historical flooding height in that area, and it must be strong enough to withstand the severest level of damage from flooding. For instance, Singaporean government has constructed the multifunctional flooding barriers to protect its nation from flooding long time ago, not only it can effectively prevent any flooding damage, it can also be used for educational purpose to teach children about the natural disasters and how they can be prevented.
In summary, flooding is one of the most serious problems caused by Green House Effect in the modern era; however, it can be effectively solved by building flooding barriers in high standard. It is predicted that more and more countries near to the sea will construct their own flooding barriers to protect their nations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 498, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'terrible damage'.
Suggestion: terrible damage
...in the early 21st century, which caused a terrible damage to many countries in this region such a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in summary, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1852.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13019390582 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7388572437 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501385041551 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.9204973989 49.4020404114 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 168.363636364 106.682146367 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.8181818182 20.7667163134 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4545454545 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125039357272 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611336078661 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398970691442 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0844628554438 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039758055708 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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