Write a letter complaining about the dirty roads and garbage in your street Why it is effect and problem What is the main causes Your suggestions

Essay topics:

Write a letter complaining about the dirty roads and garbage in your street.
• Why it is effect and problem
• What is the main causes
• Your suggestions.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to complain about the filthy roads and enormous litter, which has become a nightmare for the people of South-west Street since last six months.

As a result of muddy roads, people are reluctant to visit the street, which is affecting the local businesses very severely. Moreover, wastage thrown on the dirty street makes it even worst and it is an open invitation to serious diseases which can be avoided by clean surroundings. In short, it has deteriorating impact on both health and economy.

The key reason behind the mud is the poor sewage system, which often leaks waste water on the street, and irresponsibility of municipality worker to fix it. Furthermore, there are not enough dustbins made available where people can throw their wastage is one more contributing factor.

I would be really grateful if the gutter system is properly repaired to avoid any such problems in the future. The authorities can install more trash cans to encourage people to throw their wastage wisely to keep the environment clean.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,
Sandip Ramani

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... wisely to keep the environment clean. I look forward to hearing from you soon....
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, really, so, in short, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 32.9175257732 33% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 959.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10106382979 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7235860561 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.707446808511 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5626954661 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 4.34317383033 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120074614106 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419330287632 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496306567491 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0495811428844 0.12726935374 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528220608257 0.0580467560999 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 8.71597938144 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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