Your friend is coming to your city from overseas. write to him/her that you will not be able to accommodate him/her in your home. Include the following.- Give your reason & suggest him/her am alternate accommodation-Suggest a place and time for you to

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Your friend is coming to your city from overseas. write to him/her that you will not be able to accommodate him/her in your home. Include the following.
- Give your reason & suggest him/her am alternate accommodation
-Suggest a place and time for you to meet.

Hi Dave,

How are you doing? I hope this letter finds you in good health and mental peace. Your letter has come to me with a great surprise of your arrival to India as it’s been ages since we met last time.

When I cannot wait to see you here soon, at the same time, I am truly repentant for my inability to arrange your stay at my home. Unfortunately, my home is under renovation to repair damaged ceiling caused by heavy rain in last monsoon. I feel extremely sorry for this inconvenience caused and wished that I could make it up to you in some ways. Nevertheless, there is an excellent hotel of my friend, which is right across the street and offers good value for money. Believe me, you’ll feel like home at this place and equally convenient for us to meet whenever we want. Besides, I have planned few places to visit so we won’t be staying in hotel most of the time.

Could you please share your arrival details, so that I can confirm bookings at hotel accordingly? Obviously, I’ll come to airport to pick you up on the day of your arrival in India. Please feel free to let me know if you need me to make any other arrangements for yourself.

Again, I’m sorry and really excited to see you soon.

Best Wishes,
Sandip

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, besides, if, nevertheless, really, so, i feel

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1038.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51304347826 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47033056114 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64347826087 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4980376174 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.1428571429 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4285714286 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211304343261 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717316402026 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049494011453 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130429507385 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495581826279 0.0580467560999 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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