Some people believe that criminqls should be given longer term of prison as to reduce crime. Do you agree or disagree.
These days crime is increasing at an alarming rate in the society. Majority of folks reckon that offenders should be kept for longer imprisonment which may lead to minimise the crime rate in the country. I partially agree with the given agrument and would like to discuss my views in the forthcoming paragraphs.
There are abundant of reasons that why government should give long term punishment of prison to culprits. The chief favourable fact may be that, there are some criminals who commit hard core crimes such as murder and rape for those offenders this punishment is better. It would remind to other criminals to stop doing crimes. Therefore, it would help to makes a society good place to live there. For example, Indian government give a long term imprisonment to Dera chief of sirsa Ram Rahim in the case of rape. After taking this decision by legal bodies, the crime rate in the India is minimise at some extent.
Proceeding to the issue of why legal bodies should not give longer imprisonment to offenders. First of all, if criminals are kept in prison for long time period then prisons would become overcrowded. Consequently, government would spend more money to provide better facilities to offenders in the form of shelter, food, medical facility and clothes. Secondly, some criminals who commit minor crimes such as thieft, robbery and so on. If government keep to those ones in prison then it would be injustice for them. Instead of imprisonment, those criminals should send to rehabilitation center where they can learn new skills which may change the lifestyle and forget to do such crimes. Additional, some person only commit crimes when they confront unemployment due to lack of education so, legal authorities should provide better education and job to every citizen. As a result, it may reduce the crime rate in the nation.
To sum up, it can be confidently conveyed that, government should give longer imprisonment to only those offenders who do hard core crimes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: days'; day's
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Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'make'.
Suggestion: make
...ing crimes. Therefore, it would help to makes a society good place to live there. For...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'minimised'.
Suggestion: minimised
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Suggestion: those
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, such as, as a result, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.003003003 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6815421208 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534534534535 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9019202093 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5555555556 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05555555556 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241919129749 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744085760066 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386576436312 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152205884746 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0174644319488 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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