You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he / she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
1. say why he / she would not enjoy going to college
2. explain why getting a job is a good idea for him / her
3. suggest types of jobs that would be suitable for him / her
Dear Neha,
I am writing this letter to you regarding the letter, which I received from your side yesterday at the evening time.
I understand, your confusion related to your further education after your High School graduation. In recent time you are crossing financial issues, because of that you are not willing to continue conventional and theoretical knowledge impart in college.
In my opinion, to take educated strategies to build up career. However, you are good at in teaching profession such expertise are on high demands in Modern era, more values and it online classes. I would like recommend you to develop your own website upload lectures on different subjects’ topics. In addition, you can fulfill their financial requirements as well as save money to your college education, if you wish to pursue in future.
I finally suggest you to join teaching profession apply your best strategies to develop the future of new generation feel free to you can contact me if you need to discuss further.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Regards,
X.Y.Z
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-09-21 | rchauhan.micro | 84 | view |
| 2019-09-07 | olParya | 73 | view |
| 2019-08-06 | Gunjan Pratap | 78 | view |
| 2019-06-04 | ife bajo | 73 | view |
| 2019-06-04 | Oluwunmi | 73 | view |
- Logging of the rain forests is a serious problem and it may lead to the extinction of animal life and human life 94
- You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken.Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter• describe the problem with the equipment• explain what happened when you phon 73
- Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? 96
- You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter:•describe the s 78
- You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.. thank your friend for the holiday.. explain that you left your wallet in their house.. give them instructions of how to send it back to y 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 433, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ollege education, if you wish to pursue in future. I finally suggest you to join teachin...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 5, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Z
... hearing from you soon. Regards, X.Y.Z
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, look, regarding, so, well, in addition, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 903.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13068181818 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78053460249 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.676136363636 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6452414638 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.333333333 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 4.34317383033 223% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202815055579 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756545281239 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052998180681 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123325807507 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390363156925 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 8.71597938144 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.