Do grades encourage the students to learn? People express the different opinion on this. From my perspective, I agree with that the grades are the source of encouragement because of the couple of reasons.
First, grades carry the competition between the students and all the students do hard practice to obtain the good grades and they learn more. For instance, when I was the intermediate science student, my friend did not interest to study. But, I obtained the good marks in first year, he also though that he was also capable to get the same grade. As a result, he studied hard and got the good marks in the final year. Moreover, he collected the new books to maintain his prestige and to become the superior than me.
Next, grades are reliable to measure the knowledge and skill. Many jobs opportunities can be taken by the students which have the good grade that encourage to learn. For example, I had the excellent grade in graduate and I easily obtain a job in a famous bank. The bank manager believes that a good knowledgeable person has the excellent grade and he managed the job with high salary. As a result, I learned more about the bank system to enhance my skill and I expeditiously perform.
Further, student always want to improve the grades because they unsatisfactory even they obtain the better grade. For illustration, I was a good student and I obtained the good score in every year but I did not satisfy from my performance. Most of the time, I thought that I should be carried the full marks, that is 100%. So, I bought the new books even though I did not have the enough money to purchase the books. In addition, I studied more in library and discussed to the teacher and friends which were the better encouragement to learn the newest knowledge and obtain the enough understanding.
In conclusion, grade encourages to learn for the students because it brings the competition between the students, it reliably measures the skill and knowledge and, a student always want to increase the grades
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 508, Rule ID: SUPERIOR_THAN[1]
Message: The adjective superior is normally used with 'to'.
Suggestion: to
...his prestige and to become the superior than me. Next, grades are reliable to m...
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Line 8, column 157, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'learning'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: learning
...hich have the good grade that encourage to learn. For example, I had the excellent grade...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 353.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7790368272 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68526552059 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484419263456 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 512.1 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0473404071 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7894736842 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5789473684 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36842105263 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217310906613 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830186227488 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0963109729189 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160075996554 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0839971601842 0.0645574589148 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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