You are going on a short course to a training college abroad. It is a college that you have not been to before.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer. In your letter,
• give details of your course and your arrival/departure date
• explain your accommodation needs
• ask for information about getting to and from the college
Dear Sir/Ma’am,
I am a civil engineer residing in Pakistan and would be coming to the city of London to attend a training course of construction management for three months in a college 7 kilometers away from the accommodation.
I am writing to inform you that I have never been to London before and I would like you to arrange a few things that would be according to my daily needs. I would be arriving on 24th of October and will depart on 15th of January. Since I will be staying there in the peak season of chilled weather, the first necessity would be the provision of hot water in the washroom. I would also like to live in a quiet room with no sharing for the purpose of spending time and studying peacefully. Having a small kitchen in the room will also be my preference as I am used to eating home cooked food. It is also requested to send me details about the reasonable commute from the accommodation to the college.
I hope arranging all these will not be inconvenient to you. Thanking you in anticipation.
Regards
Huma
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 156, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t would be according to my daily needs. I would be arriving on 24th of October an...
^
Line 5, column 700, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... from the accommodation to the college. I hope arranging all these will not be i...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 869.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57368421053 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83119249955 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.0557941558 44.8134815571 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5555555556 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0970923649601 0.216113520407 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403710974756 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354373387129 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.058411617714 0.12726935374 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350313012813 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.