An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
• offer to find somewhere to stay
• give advice about what to do
• give information about what clothes to bring
Dear Mary,
I am so glad to hear that you would be coming to our city to spend holidays. It has been a long time since we last met. I am very excited to have a get together after we have finished our studies.
You do not need to worry about the accommodation here in Karachi. I will find you the best rated hotels near my residence with reasonable charges. Commuting is not a major problem as I own my car and you are free to use it anytime during your stay. There are many activities to do here therefore I will try to make sure you are not going to miss any of the fun as long as you are here. You can visit many historical places here such as Quaid-e-Azam Mausoleum and Frere Hall. The best place to attract tourists here is the seaside. Food streets are the major cause of outing and having fun at night time in Pakistan. When you are going to spend time, you will probably enjoy more than anyone else and I will definitely enjoy your company as well. And please, don’t forget to bring warm clothes this winter as it becomes very chilly and airy at night time.
Hope to see you soon.
Regards
Huma
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-11-18 | samit099 | 11 | view |
| 2019-11-18 | samit099 | 11 | view |
| 2019-09-14 | olParya | 73 | view |
| 2019-09-02 | mohseenshaikh | 73 | view |
| 2018-08-07 | Huma Mohiuddin | 11 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, therefore, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28169014085 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21096356671 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62441314554 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0696828195 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.1538461538 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3846153846 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.15384615385 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0593723924799 0.216113520407 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0196431152872 0.0766984524023 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0291673215414 0.0603063233224 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0258505818205 0.12726935374 20% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283541478559 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.