The chart below gives information about global sales of games software cds and dvd or video.
The given bar graph revel information about sales of games software, dvd/video and cds in the world from the year 2000 to 2003 it is a clear and coherent representation
It can be seen that, the highest statiscal data is cds was 35 billion dollars world wide in the year 2000 other sales if dvd/video was 18 billion dollar and games were less than 15 billion dollars
Where as the lowest is from the sales amount of two item remained almost same in the year 2003 with some increasement in the sales amount of cds decreased and finally reached to just over 30 billion dollars on the other similarly the sales amount of games increased and reached to over 15 billion dollars
In summary, dvd, gradually replaced the cds and games software sales increased for the given period of time
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, similarly, so, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 651.0 965.302439024 67% => OK
No of words: 140.0 196.424390244 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43979062825 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37008352561 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 76.0 106.607317073 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542857142857 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 188.1 283.868780488 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 8.94146341463 11% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 140.0 22.4926829268 622% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 43.030603864 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 651.0 112.824112599 577% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 140.0 22.9334400587 610% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 38.0 5.23603664747 726% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27789952005 0.215688989381 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.27789952005 0.103423049105 269% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195767685973 0.15604864568 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814752971296 0.0819641961636 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 70.5 13.2329268293 533% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -45.24 61.2550243902 -74% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 54.3 10.3012195122 527% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.87 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.51 8.06136585366 168% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 11.4329268293 472% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 58.0 10.9970731707 527% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 54.0 11.0658536585 488% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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