The chart shows the sports played in Australia in 2003.all figures in percentage
The given bar chart gives information about the nine different sport played by boys and girls during the year 2003 in Australia. The given data is percentum. It is a clear and coherent representation
It can be seen that net ball was played more by the girls as compared to boys with the difference of 25% apart from 21% girls and 13% of boys played in swimming on the other hand women same played athletics ,tennis and basket ball park which were 6%,7% and 6.5 respectively
Furthermore, 24% of boys and 5%of girls played soccer .During the year 2003 in Australia. In addition boys have more than Played in other sports in comparison to girls and boys 10%Played in both side cricket and material .
Overall ,it is evident that maximum percentage boys and girls played soccer and netball respectively
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, apart from, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 672.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 139.0 196.424390244 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8345323741 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43363162301 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54586499474 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604316546763 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 186.3 283.868780488 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 132.07634156 43.030603864 307% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 134.4 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6 5.23603664747 241% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228303754905 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128842506715 0.103423049105 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856209261019 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149954887497 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552480083758 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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