TPO42 integrated
The author of the reading passage holds that there are three effective solutions to protect birds from being injured by hitting glass windows, while the lecturer in the lecture expresses an opposite view.
To begin with, the author claims that replacing the regular glass with one-way glass that is transparent only from one side can drive birds away. However, the lecturer refutes that a big problem of it is that one-way glass reflects lights in a way similar to a mirror, and it is difficult for birds to understand the difference between the reflection of an object and the real one. Therefore, if birds see the sky and trees being reflected on the outside of a one-way glass window, they will try to fly right into it as they think it is a natural scenery.
Moreover, the author believes that painting colorful lines or other designs on windows can remind birds the existence of glass and allow people to see through from the unpainted gap. On the contrary, the lecturer rebuts that it is not practical because birds would mistakenly consider the openings in the glass where there is no paint as holes and fly right through them subsequently. So, if a business want to carry out the solution, the unpainted area should be considerably small so that it is impossible for a bird to fly though. For that matter, however, the room with such windows will be too dark to live in.
Finally, the author puts forward that electromagnets can steer birds in a different direction and keep them from hitting on the building. Instead, the lecturer retorts that this solution will not work well. It is true that birds have an innate ability to sense Earth's magnetic fields and use it as a compass to determine directions when flying, but they are navigated by it only when traveling for a great distance, such as migrating from a cold place to a warm one in winter. Yet when taking a short trip like moving from one site in the city to another, the only navigation they use is the vision-to sense the brightness of light via eyes. As a result, the third solution will not make any difference.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, third, well, while, such as, as a result, it is true, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 30.3222958057 165% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1726.0 1373.03311258 126% => OK
No of words: 369.0 270.72406181 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67750677507 5.08290768461 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.04702891845 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49175460357 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 145.348785872 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533875338753 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 419.366225166 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 21.2450331126 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.2462402765 49.2860985944 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.769230769 110.228320801 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3846153846 21.698381199 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4615384615 7.06452816374 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.567547420922 0.272083759551 209% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182967742298 0.0996497079465 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0984147055278 0.0662205650399 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.306667694684 0.162205337803 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101518203123 0.0443174109184 229% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.3589403974 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 53.8541721854 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 11.0289183223 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 12.2367328918 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 63.6247240618 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.7273730684 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.498013245 126% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.2008830022 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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