Some people think that new technologies benefits the life of workers whereas some deny the statement.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
The cutting-edge technological advancements have certainly great impact on our lives, especially at work. To which a few people think that it has improved the quality of work environment while others believe that it has played a role in degrading the quality of life in general. In my opinion, the effectiveness of any invention is lies in its users and how much they exploit it. So if it is at all to blame, it is the people otherwise technology has certainly improved the work life.
To begin with, new devices, such as laptop, that enable people to work from virtually anywhere have made the working hours very flexible. People are no more bounded to go to offices to work, they have freedom to work from home using their laptops and cell phone, which was impossible in the past. For instance, a pregnant woman can work from home rather sitting idle on the maternity leave, Thanks to technology. Moreover, workplaces are safer as a result of advanced safety measure installed at work premise to avoid any serious accidents, which has costed several lives and casualties before. Thus, it surely has revolutionized the usual work culture.
However, it is sometimes misused by some organization to slog their employee beyond working hours. Employees often to advised to carry devices to home to continue to their work, which leaves no time for leisure activities or for families. In other words, people leave office but they never actually leave their work behind. For example, average IT employee in India registers 60-70 hours of work a week. In addition, continuous sitting in front of screens have several detrimental impacts on the eyes and health, which has raised question against nonstop work habits as result of technology. So, technology has a played a role in ruining people's life.
In conclusion, technology is double-edge sword and it is only effective if it is utilized wisely. Thus, Business and workers have to learn to strike a balance between work and life to enjoy the blessings of technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in general, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98816568047 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70930973333 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57100591716 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6074199083 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1764705882 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8823529412 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0588235294 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104451509959 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411413433117 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432227653396 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0726579996509 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309025765686 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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