The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The given data provides the information about average in annual hours of sunshine in, London, New York, and Sydney. The data is calibrated in percentum. Which is clearly coherently represented.
The number of patterns are similar in London, and New York. Although New York has warmer summer and colder winter. Whereas, the average of temperature is very nice in Sydney nor colder, neither warmer . Moreover, New York is coldest in the last couple of months. Interestingly, the temperature is same in London and New York in the last month of the year respectively.
As far as hours are concerned, London have been coldest city. The sunshine is shown only 1,180 hours in annually. In spite of that, New York, and Sydney are approximately equal hours of sun rising , 2,535, and 2,473.
Overall, London is coldest city. The weather is clearly enjoyable in Sydney in whole season. On the other hand, New York has been effective season in intermediate time.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 200, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'been the coldest'.
Suggestion: been the coldest
...far as hours are concerned, London have been coldest city. The sunshine is shown only 1,180 ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... approximately equal hours of sun rising , 2,535, and 2,473. Overall, London is c...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the coldest'.
Suggestion: is the coldest
...ng , 2,535, and 2,473. Overall, London is coldest city. The weather is clearly enjoyable ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, whereas, in spite of, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 727.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91216216216 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60178571156 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560810810811 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.2605933334 43.030603864 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.5833333333 112.824112599 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.3333333333 22.9334400587 54% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111175284817 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450283954681 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490974557104 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0771427970577 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523643502179 0.0819641961636 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.31 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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