The graph below shows a survey result of 4000 participants who expressed what important aspects they have learned from the internship they have completed.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates, average outcome of a survey conducted for 4000 internship members about ten various factors they achieved after the course completion. Units are measured in percentage.
Generally speaking practical knowledge, work operation, communication skill, work environment, understanding industry work experience, team work, time management, future carrier path, was the surveyed opinion from internships.Overall, the most significant aspect that practical knowledge among the mentioned achievement, while, more than 26% learned aspects was others without mentioned.
However, practical knowledge and communication skills account for 15% and 14% respectively. Whereas, work environment and team work demonstrates, the least result with mere 4% and 3% respectively. Moreover, 10% of people get knowledge regarding understanding industry and 7% have real work experience.
Seven percent of people makes up time management, work operation and planning future carrier path followed by the internship experienced survey. As is observed 74% consist of different knowledge aspects behalf of internship remaining 26% accounts for others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, regarding, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 33.7804878049 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.32278481013 4.92477711251 128% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32365268955 2.65546596893 125% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.727848101266 0.547539520022 133% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 99.4333162225 43.030603864 231% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 124.875 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114137710038 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045220955416 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338882808313 0.0843802449381 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0708245170546 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224879172827 0.0819641961636 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 61.2550243902 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.3012195122 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.38 11.4140731707 170% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.77 8.06136585366 134% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 40.7170731707 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.