Some people claim that not enough of the waste from home is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for government to make it a legal requirement.
To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?
It is true that, many of the home sewage may not be recycled properly. While, some people argued that the only solution of recycling home waste by the enforcement of law. However, in my opinion, which would not be adequately practical only by the law, whereas, government could arrange educational lessons for the treatment plan of recycling, and methods.
Initially, people often considered it as, by the strict punishment by the legal rules may mitigate the decreasing count of recycling wastes. Such actions seems to be applicable if the public have enough knowledge regarding the process, steps and varieties of recycling. On the other hand, irrespective of lectures or instructions many of the illiterate people would be punished by the law and that makes situation worst than success. Empower a government authority to assess and analyse the process after giving the instruction would be enhance the result in order to apply the law. Since, the information's regarding the recycling would be convey through media in terms of advertisements, questionnaires, and so on would be flourish the outcome.
Owing to the fact that, application of legal form towards those who are unwilling to follow after the instruction would be justifiable. Because, recycling may lead to tremendous benefits of environment and nation in order to be properly practiced. Thereby, government may authorize certain committee to follow up and identify those who dispose waste indifferent to recycle. For the awareness of recycling program every family members to segregate recycled items separate and arrange for a day to recycle as a whole. Make use of law, people may over conscious about the material which they use in terms of recycling and non recycling items and which would helps the safety of nature and home ambiance. As all sort of law, recycling based rules must need officials to follow and tend to inform the consequences.
To sum up, prior to the legal action government should educate the importance and efficacy of recycling methods and purpose. Get ride of other consequences, such lectures would may produce good results than the direct punishment in order to law and legal requisites.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 72, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...me sewage may not be recycled properly. While, some people argued that the only solut...
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Line 3, column 155, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'seem'.
Suggestion: seem
...count of recycling wastes. Such actions seems to be applicable if the public have eno...
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Line 3, column 415, Rule ID: WORST_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worse'?
Suggestion: worse
...hed by the law and that makes situation worst than success. Empower a government auth...
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Line 5, column 656, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...and non recycling items and which would helps the safety of nature and home ambiance....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, regarding, so, whereas, while, sort of, in my opinion, it is true, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1838.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20679886686 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87927975507 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543909348442 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.236575445 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 114.875 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0625 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266030040964 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0944557649911 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074210820124 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170682320296 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650579264374 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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