Dear James,
I am John, a cousin of Weber. I am really excited to know from my cousin that he had a friend in Paris, where I am planning to have a vacation this summer along with my friends. Hope he might have a word with you regarding. I am working as the city planner for the government of India for 3 years.
To start with, I am very enthusiastic to visit Paris as this is my first-time visit. In fact, this my first time traveling to outer countries from India. the primary reason for my trip is I would like to know the whereabouts of different structures of the city famous building in Paris along with the culture, traditions, and lifestyle of the people over there. Secondly, I would always have a dream to visit the Eiffel tower and been my long pending desire.
Apart from that, if you do not mind me asking, I appreciate your help in listing me some the places to visit and kind of best traditional food that can be tasted. As I am being accompanied by my best friends, We are very excited to know the nightlife of the city. As I am being explorer I would like make most of from the trip and make a fruitful and I am sure your help would be essential.
Looking to hearing from you and excited to meet you.
faithfully,
John,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...raveling to outer countries from India. the primary reason for my trip is I would l...
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Line 7, column 119, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the best'.
Suggestion: of the best
...ng me some the places to visit and kind of best traditional food that can be tasted. As...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Faithfully
...ng from you and excited to meet you. faithfully, John,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, apart from, in fact, kind of, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1017.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 236.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3093220339 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45638118622 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53813559322 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 313.2 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8310866031 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.75 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 4.34317383033 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163056639709 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578421175024 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491998245709 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113806280585 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403793819646 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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