You are going to spend your vacation in a city in a foreign country. You have never been there before. Your cousin has a friend who lives there. Write a letter to the friend. In your letter
• Introduce yourself
• Say why you are making this trip
• Ask some questions about the city (e.g. places to see, things to do, things to bring)
Dear John,
Hello, my name is Irma. I'm Jake's cousin. When Jake told me that he had a friend who lived in Toronto, I was excited. I'm hoping to visit Toronto in the summer. I hope you don't mind that i asked for your address. Jake said you probably wouldn't mind answering some questions if I wrote to you.
When I found out that I would get there three weeks for a vacation this summer, i decided i wanted to go to a foreign country. I've always dreamed of going to Canada. I love watching baseball and i would love to see a major league game in Toronto. The Toronto Blue Jays are my favourite team.
Where should i stay when i visit Toronto? I think it is probably too expensive to stay in a hotel downtown the city centre for more than a week. Do you know any youth hostels? Also, could you tell me about the weather in the summer? I don't know what to pack.
I look foward to hearing from you if you have time to write back. Maybe, we can meet for lunch.
Best wishes,
Irma Klein
P/s. Jake said to say hello
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear John, Hello, my name is Irma. Im Jakes cousin. When Jake told me...
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Dear John, Hello, my name is Irma. Im Jakes cousin. When Jake told me that he...
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...nd who lived in Toronto, I was excited. Im hoping to visit Toronto in the summer. ...
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...visit Toronto in the summer. I hope you dont mind that i asked for your address. Jak...
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...n the summer. I hope you dont mind that i asked for your address. Jake said you p...
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...or your address. Jake said you probably wouldnt mind answering some questions if I wrot...
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...three weeks for a vacation this summer, i decided i wanted to go to a foreign cou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, may, so, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 829.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.18686868687 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.07484803982 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3212673238 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 43.6315789474 76.5299724578 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.4210526316 16.8248392259 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.21052631579 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 3.94845360825 329% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227608512946 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558992773919 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674509346611 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109405430327 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059829847801 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.5 8.37731958763 42% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.71 70.7449484536 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.7 7.45979381443 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.54 8.71597938144 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.