The chart and graph below give information about sales and share prices for Coca-Cola.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
» You should write at least 150 words.
The pie chart illustrates, the amount of coca cola sales in five different regions such as, north america, Latin America, Europe, Asia, Africa and middle east in 2000. While, line graph depicts, the data of fizzling coca cola share price in dollar from 1996 to 2001.Overall, north america comprise of most of the coca cola sales volume in total of 17.1 bn over the period given and the most noticeable trend on share price during the year of 1998.
As is observed the pie chart, most significant area of coca cola sales by 2000 in north america with 30.4%. Latin america and Europe makes up sales volume around 25.7 % and 20.5 % respectively over the given period. While, the least amount of sale in coca cola unit case volume in Africa and middle east with 7% which is compared to two times lower than Asia with 16.4 %.
Regarding share price of coca cola begun at 1996, approximately 35 $ which increase dramatically to near 70$ the next year. While, the middle of 1997 share price declined to below 60$ and rapidly climbed up to 80$by 1998, after that price gradually decrease and dip into below 50 in 2000. Moreover, there was a surge in trend with 60$ before falling to 55$in 2001.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Overall
...share price in dollar from 1996 to 2001.Overall, north america comprise of most of the ...
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Line 1, column 290, Rule ID: COMPRISE_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprise' or 'consist of'?
Suggestion: comprise; consist of
...rom 1996 to 2001.Overall, north america comprise of most of the coca cola sales volume in t...
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Message: The proper name in singular (america) must be used with a third-person verb: 'comprises'.
Suggestion: comprises
...rom 1996 to 2001.Overall, north america comprise of most of the coca cola sales volume i...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... Africa and middle east with 7% which is compared to two times lower than Asia w...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ich is compared to two times lower than Asia with 16.4 %. Regarding share pr...
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Line 5, column 65, Rule ID: CURRENCY[2]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$35'.
Suggestion: $35
... coca cola begun at 1996, approximately 35 $ which increase dramatically to near 70$...
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Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$70'.
Suggestion: $70
...5 $ which increase dramatically to near 70$ the next year. While, the middle of 199...
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Line 5, column 181, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$60'.
Suggestion: $60
...e of 1997 share price declined to below 60$ and rapidly climbed up to 80 1998, afte...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...p to 80 1998, after that price gradually decrease and dip into below 50 in 2000. ...
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Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$60'.
Suggestion: $60
...reover, there was a surge in trend with 60$ before falling to 55 2001.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, regarding, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 973.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63333333333 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24387151707 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590476190476 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6829404512 43.030603864 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.625 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194003187404 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852406251856 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048903192366 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137491372619 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235955238241 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.4329268293 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.