The chart and graph below give information about sales and share prices for Coca-Cola.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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The chart and graph below give information about sales and share prices for Coca-Cola.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The pie chart reveals the consumption of Coca-Cola bottles divided by countries in 2000. The second diagram shows the change in the share prices over the period from 1996 to 2001.
According to the first chart the most popular distribution destination was North America with 30.4 per cent of bottles sold. The second largest consumer was Latin America, where 25.7 percent of the total volume was purchased. Europe and Asia acquired 20.5 and 16.4 per cent respectively. In Africa and Middle East Coca-Cola was an unpopular beverage and remained fairly small consumers at 7 per cent of the total volume of sales.

The graph shows the fluctuation of share price over the 5 years period. In the 1996 share price of Coca-Cola was approximately $32. then this number started to grow to reach the peak in mid-1998 with $75. The price fell gradually and in mid-2000 shares were valued at approximately $38. It also could be seen from the graph that there was a slight growth and then minimal drop in 2001 when price stood at roughly $55 per share.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, second, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75555555556 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48116360595 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4453949853 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8181818182 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3636363636 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133728670126 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610736364572 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539828634066 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0984506062632 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479131691348 0.0819641961636 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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