The bar chart illustrates the rate at which fast food was consumed in USA by people shown in percentages over a decade from 2003 to 2013. In this period majority of Americans ate at fast food restaurant either once a week or once a month. Even though there were 30%-33% people in 2003 to 2006 whose intake of fast food was several times a week it dropped down by 4% in 2013, while 10%-15% had few times a year.
The chart depicts around 30% - 33% Americans preferred eating from fast food restaurants weekly once, which apparently dropped to 27% by 2013. It can be observed that 30% people who ate fast food once a month in 2003 had plummeted by 5% in 2006 which steeply increased to 33% in 2013.
However, it is opposite in the case of individuals who ate many times a week, it was 17% in 2003 which just increased by 3% in 2006, however it dipped back to just over 15% in 2013. While only 10%-15% ate fast food few times a year which didn't change during this 10 year period, people eating daily and not even once accounted for less than 5%.
To sum it up, the frequency at which people in USA ate from fast food restaurants varied throughout the decade. There was increase in the percentage of people who ate once or twice a month in 2013 and there was no change in the numbers of people who ate every day or who never ate at a fast food restaurant.
- The chart shows how frequently people in the USA ate fast food in restaurants between 2003 and 2013. 67
- Writing task 2Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.Discuss both these vi 22
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...3, while 10%-15% had few times a year. The chart depicts around 30% - 33% ameri...
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Line 7, column 216, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...a month in 2013 and least either eating everyday or never.
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Line 7, column 228, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...013 and least either eating everyday or never.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, however, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1024.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 233.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39484978541 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32033573485 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50643776824 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 296.1 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 32.9156117974 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.0 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.125 22.9334400587 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345582988116 0.215688989381 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.183705352777 0.103423049105 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860123836645 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243329301487 0.15604864568 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0986706598867 0.0819641961636 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.42 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.77 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.