There are many who argue that it is beneficial to share as much knowledge in fields like research, business and education while some people are of opinion to have limited sharing of information with public. This essay will sort both the views and state my opinion as well.
We live in the era where there is free flowing information available to public through different media on every possible subject ,which is undoubtedly beneficial for those who wish to extend their knowledge for betterment of their community and the nation. For instance tutors who share academic lectures or notes for free can help the students of financially low families gain knowledge easily or if the scientists corporate their research with other researchers can find cures for incurred diseases.
- Writing task 2Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.Discuss both these vi 22
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 129, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 41.998997996 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 652.0 1615.20841683 40% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 127.0 315.596192385 40% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13385826772 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.35699682299 4.20363070211 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61381745041 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 176.041082164 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.716535433071 0.561755894193 128% => OK
syllable_count: 207.9 506.74238477 41% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.0308325615 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.0 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.75 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16328110468 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953394938176 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786876852446 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140119296661 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056946126847 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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