It is obvious, I think, that people oppose making changes in their lives because of fear to alter it in worse way. For instance, people who move to a new house, town or country. Persons prefer avoid to adapt to unknown environment, culture and neighbours. As a result, men would miss an opportunity to succeed.
Overall, in our lives, there are various changes, such as physical changes, when human make decision to become thin or well-built; life-changing, when person need to adjust his nutritional state due to health problems and so on. Nevertheless, even if people are sure that changes would lead to the improvement, they would still afraid of it. If a person deny to try something new, he may totally stop self-development because of the lack of life experience and a faith in own skills needed to realize his dreams.
Any problem has its answer. I guess, a good idea would be to get used to failure. Almost all successful people encourage it. They said that it cannot be achieved without adjustments, people should not be afraid to changes, they should take risks and never give up. People should not make a habit of permanence, they ought to get ready for any changes.
In conclusion, it is crucial for people to think properly before making any decisions, but they should not ignore a possibility to change something. Despite being supportive to help others their goals, people themselves must be brave enough to welcome new opportunities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 194, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid adapting'.
Suggestion: avoid adapting
... house, town or country. Persons prefer avoid to adapt to unknown environment, culture and nei...
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Line 2, column 354, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'deny trying'.
Suggestion: deny trying
...y would still afraid of it. If a person deny to try something new, he may totally stop self...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, well, for instance, i guess, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88259109312 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8011279436 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647773279352 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.11575839 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1428571429 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6428571429 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142863877092 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540461866514 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469825195385 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882311079655 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0185655144438 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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