Some people argue that cars should be banned in city centers while others are against this idea. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
About three hundred years ago, the fist vehicle was designed and at the beginning of the nineteen century the first car's structure was designed. During the past century car industry have a lot of promotion. In the past, car was a luxury and expensive device so many people could not buy a car even they did have a driver license. Nowadays, situation is changed car is known for a necessary device for city life. Consequently, many people have one or even more cars. Although, having a car has some problems, these problems causes some argue between people.
Today, we have a lot of problem with air pollution and as we know cars are produced many dangerous gases. Every city is dived in two or more important sections. The most important section is city center and this section most of the time is crowded by people and obviously by cars. Unfortunately, people is Accustomed to use their private car for every purpose for go to work, school, party and so far.
In my opinion, we should better have some rules for using a car in the cities, although obey these rules is too hard. The first reason for having rules is air pollution especially in warm seasons. The second reason is traffic in the most roads. This problem is most significant in the city center because most the important buildings are located in this part. Consequently, in rush hours we have traffic jam in city center. However, we won't have this problem, if we use public transportation. The last reason is lack of fissile oil
To sum up, using private car is very simple and comfortable but causes some issues. We have some responsibilities in our society and in our family and one of them is try to have clean air.
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During the past century car industry have a lot of promotion.
During the past century car industry has a lot of promotion.
Sentence: Although, having a car has some problems, these problems causes some argue between people.
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Sentence: Unfortunately, people is Accustomed to use their private car for every purpose for go to work, school, party and so far.
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Suggestion: Refer to for and go
Sentence: We have some responsibilities in our society and in our family and one of them is try to have clean air.
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Suggestion: Refer to is and try
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