The given tabular chart depicts the information about the people aged 30-50 ,in eight different countries are spending their favorite time in these 7 different activities(tv,sport,reading,hobbies,music,beach and sleep).the data is calibrated in per centum .
It can bee seen that ,Canadians ,Australians ,and Americans like watching tv near about 60%.The percentage of chinese and koreans in the same activity is 15% and 22%. Apart from all this the highest percentage of Japanese ,koreans ,chinese ,and french in reading is 62%,60%,60%,and 30 compared with other pastime activities whereas both australians and americans just like reading 15%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, whereas, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 33.7804878049 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 549.0 965.302439024 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 94.0 196.424390244 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.84042553191 4.92477711251 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.11373725848 3.73543355544 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.03193128033 2.65546596893 189% => OK
Unique words: 75.0 106.607317073 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.797872340426 0.547539520022 146% => OK
syllable_count: 156.6 283.868780488 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.0770779797 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 183.0 112.824112599 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3333333333 22.9334400587 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 5.23603664747 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0920362631124 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582218346862 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516719217964 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0782595777189 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529572527071 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.7 13.2329268293 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 61.2550243902 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.3012195122 161% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.18 11.4140731707 151% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.06136585366 123% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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