You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to your English speaking friend. In your letter:
1. Explain why you have moved
2. Describe the new house
3. Invite your friend to visit
Dear Emma,
It's been quite a time since we have talked, I hope everything is going just fine. I am writing to you to tell you that I have just shifted to a new house as my father, who is an Army officer, has been alloted a new house in the city just right by that children's park near the city mall.
This new house is even better that the previous one that we stayed in and has a big garden along with a porch that can fi in more cars. The house is double story and has 2 terraces, one at the front and the other at the back, both having a great view of the beautiful city. The inside of the house is also very spacious having 2 bedrooms on the ground floor and 3 bedrooms on the upper floor along with a study room that we have changed into a nursery for our little brother.
The main reason that I am telling you all about this is so that you can come and visit me sometime and take time off from your busy schedule. We will spend all day long and enjoy our time together and I will show you my room that I have decorated myself.
Do bring your little sister as well so she can play with my little brother in his room. I am sure we will have a great time together.
I hope you will come and visit me, I'll look forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Haseena Khan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Emma, Its been quite a time since we have talk...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...to a nursery for our little brother. The main reason that I am telling you all a...
^^^
Line 11, column 36, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
.... I hope you will come and visit me, Ill look forward to your reply. Yours si...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1030.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 256.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.0234375 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.91665959011 2.54303337028 75% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546875 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 321.3 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.3941841811 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6363636364 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2727272727 16.8248392259 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.18181818182 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208293950729 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853304840825 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484076830073 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120025252632 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409778180742 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 70.7449484536 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.33 8.71597938144 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.26 7.59969072165 82% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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