Cities are getting big and overcrowded. Give reasons causes and solution for this.
Big cities are the important part of the world. The all facilities are provided in the cities. One of the most controversial issue today relates that why the cities are getting big and overcrowded ?how to mend this problem?
The first step is to understand why is this happening. Broadly speaking, there are three main reasons for this.The first and foremost is that the large number of facilities are available in cities like education.Education is important part for everyone and it help to develop the country.education is easily provided in cities as compair to villages. The large number of institutes, centres and universities are available in cities. Secondly, there are large number of job opportunities in cities due to industrialisation. In cities the jobs are provided according to their qualifications. One of the cause of this could be the large number of public facilities are provided in cities. For instance, one of the most usable facilities for public is transportation. Every person in their life use transportation to reach at their destination.
There is almost certainly no one solution to this problem given the complexity of its causes. however, one option has to be the development of town and village site areas. If the industrialisationshould be introduced in villages the problem of unemployment has to be decrease and youth will be not attract towards the cities. The overcrowding in the cities have been automatically decline.secondly, the public facilities like 24 hours electricity and transportation should be introduced in villages and towns. The education system in small areas should be groom up.Then the overcrowation shell be decreased.
In conclusion, it may not be possible to find a complete solution of this. This could be probably solved by the help of government and individuals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, as to, broadly speaking, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26369863014 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.51352338744 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489726027397 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.2916517751 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3888888889 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2222222222 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236768493382 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724226956057 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659743754286 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146379740663 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682511098943 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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