In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this?
Tertiary education is the most important part of human life. It help to the development of country. One of the most controversial issue today relates to that is the work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies encouraged the youngsters or not? In this essay, I am going to examine this question from both point of view.
On one side of the argument, there are number of people who argue that the it is beneficial. First and the foremost advantage is that by work and travel youngsters can explore the different places and get knowledge about different cultures and traditions. Secondly, the intellectual skills also improved by work and travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. There confidence improve by
Communication with different peoples.Thirdly, practical and experimental knowledge also improved by work and travel .For instance, it is considered that the young people who do work or travel before university studies they achieve success easily than others,acquire study easily.
On the other side, there are the number of people who totaly opposite.they said that it has also disadvantages. The first and foremost disadvantage is that the link of study totally broken in student.Secondly, it makes the youngsters money minded. They start give priority to money. To achieve more and more money they start neglect to study and carry on their jobs. To give a clear example, most of the people who go to other countries for studies but they starting doing work and leave their studies between.
Overall, it is evident that travelling with work before tertiary education is advantageous and disadvantageous. It depends upon the thinking of individuals and choose one of them very carefully.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20905923345 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01712787556 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505226480836 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.3634437523 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1333333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383621353837 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109760537909 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116170692716 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200302899167 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826382252516 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.