You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.Say how
Dear Sir,
I would like to bring it to your kind attention that I have been pursuing my Masters degree. The exams for the same are scheduled after about two months, for which i need to prepare well and I need a little more time for extra preparation to enhance my qualification. While undertaking the office work I can assure that I will not allow any let up or shortcoming in my desired duty. I would request you to spare me extra duties to prepare for my exam. Once I clear my exam I will be able to perform at a higher capability in the interest of the organization. I will put in extra timings after completion of my exams to compensate for the time off permitted to me.
In view of the above I would earnestly request that I be given some time off my extra duties so that I can prepare well for my Masters exam.
Thanking You,
Yours sincerely
Amber
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...duled after about two months, for which i need to prepare well and I need a littl...
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Line 3, column 453, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...me extra duties to prepare for my exam. Once I clear my exam I will be able to perfo...
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Line 8, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... exam. Thanking You, Yours sincerely Amber
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 704.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31901840491 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54535433882 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576687116564 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 234.0 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.5954579582 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.375 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275827625811 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127717609996 0.0766984524023 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068169798278 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198821916904 0.12726935374 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459954809145 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.78 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.