You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.
Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.
Say how the qualification helps your job or company.
Dear Mr. Anderson,
I am writing to ask for two weeks of vacation in order to prepare for my final exam on programming languages. The tests are due on the first of November in the city of Astana.
Two months ago, I enrolled for the course in the C++ language, because my next project will deal with coding programs for micro-controllers. The course is complicated with technical issues, but I am planning to graduate it with high scores. Even though I have worked hard, I feel that I need to revise the studied material once more, so that I will not repeat the course again, so I want to two weeks for preparation. As soon as I pass the exam, I promise to catch up on my postponed tasks, which seem unimportant, in my current project. Furthermore, I would like to inform you that the knowledge in C# will be imperative in the upcoming year, since I will be in charge of developing crucial parts in our next project for Microsoft company, which is supposed to bring us five million dollars as a revenue.
Although the exams takes place next month, I would be graceful, if you give me your permission sooner, as it would allow me to concentrate more on my weak sides in coding. Please, let me know, if you have some questions regarding my plans.
Yours sincerely,
Tolegen
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, regarding, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1062.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 231.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5974025974 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73003364683 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 9.0 1.83505154639 490% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.291729951 44.8134815571 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.2 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175798737137 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645830611783 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468605092787 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109486389484 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338989366683 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.