You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
• Explain why you have moved
• Describe the new house
• Invite your friend to come and visit
Dear John,
I hope this letter finds you well. Guess what? I finally moved to a new house that I told you.
Actually, as you know, I had some troubles with my old house. Firstly, I had a crazy and stingy landlord in that when I delayed paying my rent on time, he’d shout at me. Secondly, when I had guest he came and ask who is ones’. Thirdly, he was really dirty and didn’t care about it.
Finally, I move to West minister which is my dream neighborhood, however, it isn't so dreaming house that I move but I really like it. It's small with one bedroom, a nice kitchen with a small window to the street.
I want to invite you to my new house for the weekend, if you’re free at the weekend I hope to see you because I have a little party with our classmate in high school.
I’m sure you’ll have a great time.
Best regards,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 197, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[3]
Message: Possible agreement error – use past participle here: 'guested'.
Suggestion: guested
...pos;d shout at me. Secondly, when I had guest he came and ask who is ones'. Thir...
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Line 7, column 78, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...h is my dream neighborhood, however, it isnt so dreaming house that I move but I rea...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 712.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3950617284 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45200849897 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672839506173 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 209.7 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3543915551 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.2 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3 4.34317383033 260% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202586431806 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730682608097 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845257189685 0.0603063233224 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133132857809 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811092775904 0.0580467560999 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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