You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
• Explain why you have moved
• Describe the new house
• Invite your friend to come and visit
Dear john,
I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and to the best of spirits. I am writing this letter to inform you that we moved to a new place because of my husband's new job. I am really sorry that I could not come to inform you personally, as it was a sudden plan and we had to do a lot of packing and other work. Also, I am inviting you to visit our house with your family.
As I told you that my husband has got a new job thus for that reason we had to moved to Ohio as his work site has now changed from Boston to Ohio. Unlike earlier, now we bought our own house. it is a big house with four bedrooms , the garden area and a garage as well. The surrounding location is also very bountiful.
Summer vacations are starting soon, I invite you with your family to visit our new house and stay with us for a week or two. Kids would have great time together and so we elders.Niagra fall is just two-hour drive from here, we could definitely go there as well.
I look forward to meeting you soon.
warm regards
Harry
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear john, I hope this letter finds you in radiant ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...e earlier, now we bought our own house. it is a big house with four bedrooms , the...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...se. it is a big house with four bedrooms , the garden area and a garage as well. T...
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Line 4, column 320, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...unding location is also very bountiful. Summer vacations are starting soon, I in...
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Line 6, column 179, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Niagra
...ve great time together and so we elders.Niagra fall is just two-hour drive from here, ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., we could definitely go there as well. I look forward to meeting you soon. wa...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Warm
... I look forward to meeting you soon. warm regards Harry
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, really, so, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.0931372549 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15605341529 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617647058824 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4286165223 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.5833333333 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254065297388 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843074724704 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716843054704 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140617162572 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712521876135 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.15 8.71597938144 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.72 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.