Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
Technology, instead of making our life difficult, simplifies our life in many real life senarios.
Even though many people argue that technology is degrading our life and making it worse, I beleive that it is not the case. It is instead making our life easier by freeing us from those unnecessary things that hinders our daily activities. Internet ofr example has made our life faster than before. Previously, we had to wait just for the browser to open and watching youtube videos was unimaginable, but with the improvement in technology the internet speed got a lot faster. We can even stream and download movies in just a matter of minutes. Technology has made our life a lot easier in communication as well. I remember when I was anout five years old the olny way to communicate with my grand parents was by sending letters that would take weeks to reach. Thus, it would take atleast two weeks for the reply. This difficulty ,however, has been removed by improvement in technology. Thus, technology has have helped a lot in daily activities in peoples life.
Apart from the basic things, technology has aslo helped in education making the learning process complicated free. Many learning sites in the internet has provided students learning opportunuties that they might not had got from the schools and unversities they some. Some students just from the internet learns to built a robot which could not have been possible with out technology. Because of the development in technology the student was able to use the internet services for his education. Research in the field of science and medicine has gained pace because of technology. Today medical students can perform virtual surgery while particing which helps provide a real life senario which is not possible with out technology. Many research programs, like the large hadron colloiders, which was impossible to carry out twenty years is possible only because of the advancement in technology.
Technology on the other hand has limited our ability to memorize. Since every this is stored in the memory of a computer or a phone that we carry, we have become over dependent to these devices. At times this habit may complicate our life. For example, if our smartphones battery is dead and we have to make and emergency call them we may not remember the phone number of the caller. This devolves the situation. So, over dependence on technology will unnecessarliy complicate our life.
Thus instead of being our indulgent on technology, we should use it carefully.
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- Argument Essay 16
- Universities should require students to take courses only within those fields they are interested in studying. 66
- Knowing about the past cannot help people to make important decisions today. 50
- Parents must be involved in their children's education in order to make them successful. 50
- Nature should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even it these areas could be developed for natural gain. 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 829, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...two weeks for the reply. This difficulty ,however, has been removed by improvement...
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Line 2, column 908, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...ent in technology. Thus, technology has have helped a lot in daily activities in peo...
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Line 3, column 364, Rule ID: WITH_OUT[1]
Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
...obot which could not have been possible with out technology. Because of the development ...
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Line 3, column 709, Rule ID: WITH_OUT[1]
Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
...real life senario which is not possible with out technology. Many research programs, lik...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, thus, well, while, apart from, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 33.0505617978 136% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2107.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 422.0 442.535393258 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99289099526 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7332918846 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514218009479 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 678.6 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9045661548 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.28 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.88 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52 5.21951772744 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207229629345 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641416883648 0.0831039109588 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652698819883 0.0758088955206 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144978854648 0.150359130593 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577999217878 0.0667264976115 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.