Knowing about the past cannot help people to make important decisions today.
Many people believe that ruminating about our past is a waste of time as it does not provide any information, especially in this present age, where everything from technological advancements to our lifestyle is changing in a rapid pace. No matter how fast our life is changing, gaining past knowledge helps make important decisions about the present.
People are always thinking about their future. What is going to happen, how is my life going to be after 10 years etc. Since our brain is creative and imaginative it can fabricate many possibilities that might happen. This gives us a virtual satisfaction and we are completely enthralled by it. This type imagination does not lead to anywhere as we become smug about our present. Similar, if those imagined things does not happen they we become disheartened and hopeless. Failure is eminent in such situation. This will also effect the decisions we make in present. For example, a student imagines getting top scores and does not work hard in the present because he thinks that he has the top score. This behavior only will provide him with failure. Ruminating about the past activities, instead, would help the student because he can improve on those past events and never let it happen in the present. During this exam preparation he can revise his past exams and gain insights about his mistakes and improve his exam. Thus, thinking about past will help to be successful in our present.
Knowing about the past is helpful in sports as sportsmen need high level of motivation to succeed. If a player going through rough times in his play. Every move he makes is not helping him to succeed. He may be fit and worthy of win but the only thing lacking is the motivation. Then, past successes and events like the trophies he had won in his childhood, remembering his families smiles when he made those past achievements will be a very strong sources of motivation to be successful in his game. Thus in in the field of sports, remembering past events and successes will helps players psychologically.
Apart from the psychological motivations, knowing about the past is useful in the field of medicine and health. Many diseases are heritary and knowing the medical reports of parents and grandparents helps give insight about the diseases they had possessed. This will help the younger generations invaluable information about their body and save themselves from life taking diseases.
Since every person does not have a fruitful past and remembering those past events can bring stress and unhappiness in their life. For example someone might have lost a lot of money in the past and he just thinks about that drinks all day. People have taken their lives by thinking what they could have done right in their past. Instead of worrying about it in the present they should take valuable lessons from those mistakes and work hard to achieve lost success.
Therefore, getting valuable information about the past helps make valuable decision about our life and leads to the path of success.
- Universities should require students to take courses only within those fields they are interested in studying. 66
- A recent study rating 100 college football players showed a strong relationship between their number of colds caught per year and their team s records Of the players studied those who had the fewest colds had teams with the win loss ratios that were on av 60
- Parents must be involved in their children's education in order to make them successful. 50
- It is more important for students to understand ideas and concepts that it is for them to learn facts. Agree or disagree? 60
- Argument Essay 16
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: affect
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...ed high level of motivation to succeed. If a player going through rough times in h...
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... to succeed. He may be fit and worthy of win but the only thing lacking is the mo...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'source'?
Suggestion: source
...past achievements will be a very strong sources of motivation to be successful in his g...
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Suggestion: Thus,
...otivation to be successful in his game. Thus in in the field of sports, remembering ...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, apart from, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 62.0 33.0505617978 188% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 83.0 58.6224719101 142% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2529.0 2235.4752809 113% => OK
No of words: 513.0 442.535393258 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9298245614 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75914943092 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62671415189 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 215.323595506 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487329434698 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 783.0 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.6155373607 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2068965517 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6896551724 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41379310345 5.21951772744 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.2758426966 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311041958348 0.243740707755 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906177542137 0.0831039109588 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863595618604 0.0758088955206 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196518925499 0.150359130593 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547913652009 0.0667264976115 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 14.1392134831 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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