It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree?
In my view, the situation where young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible is better than young adults prefer to live with their parents for a longer time. I have some reasons and examples to support my claim, which are described below.
The main reason for supporting leaving the parents and live independently is that it makes young adults more responsible in life. Young adulthood is a very crucial period for the development of any human. If they live with parents, they have a much lessers responsibility, and this results in a lack of seriousness for the life issues. For example, the adult living alone will be responsible for everything he does. If he gets involved in a car accident, he will be the responsible one and can go to jail. This results in careful driving, while the adult driving his dad's car will not go to jail, instead, his dad will be responsible for his car.
Another reason is that adults living alone will value everything they have because they have earned it and they know how hard it is to earn money, while adults living on their parent's money can never understand the hard work behind that money and they do not value the things they should. Adult living on his own will happily eat whatever he can afford, while adult living with his parents will have many complaints if the ordered food at the restaurant is not of his liking.
One more important thing is that the adult living on his own can make difficult life decisions on his own, while the adult living with his parents will get afraid and will fear for the outcome. It will be extremely hard for him to select in which college course he should apply, while it will be more clear and firm decision for the independent adult.
One negative thing for the independent adult can be the lack of guidance. If the independent adult goes on the wrong path, then there will be no one to advise him and to stop him from continuing that, while the adult living with his parents will always have his parents to help him and guide him. Their experience can be very helpful for the young adult making some crucial life decisions. For example, if the adult start to take drugs, his parents will stop him and will advise him to stop it, but in the case of the independent adult, there will be no one to keep an eye on him and to stop him, which could prove worse for him in the future.
Independent young adults gain many qualities like decision-making, self-confidence and have better motivation to succeed in life than the adults living with their parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, while, for example, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 25.0 9.8082437276 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2117.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 460.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60217391304 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42793583127 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.419565217391 0.524837075471 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 653.4 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.51792114695 284% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.7825024004 48.9658058833 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.529411765 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0588235294 20.6045352989 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88235294118 5.45110844103 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0645693604136 0.236089414692 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0343175936513 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0256721321371 0.0737576698707 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0476484529021 0.150856017488 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197545428188 0.0645574589148 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 58.1214874552 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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