In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
These day, it seems that more people prefer to live independently than ever before in many parts of the world. Yet, there remains some disagreement as to whether the effects of living alone are positive or negative. I personally believe that the drawbacks of living alone far outweigh its benefits, which I will discuss in my further piece of writing.
To embark with, there are manifold detrimental effects of living alone. Firstly, living lonely creates loneliness and depression among people. The increasing trend of living alone has a direct relationship on the percentage of people suffer from psychological problems these days. This islolation often leads people to choose a lifestyle that is often negative. A recent study reveals that single-person family members often rely on drugs and many of them become addicted. Moreover, the human is a social being and living alone is against their natural tendency.
In addition to it, nowadays, the cost of living is higher than in the past so this trend can also cause the burden of household bills. For many bearing the total expenses is tough and this leads them to get involved in crimes. Also, people miss out the emotional support and friendly conversations which they can share while living together with their family and friends. In other words, these people run away from their family responsibilities which makes them an anti social animal.
On the flip side, there are some positive development to live alone. First is, people who choose to live alone completely have freedom to make decisions on how they live. They can decide how their house with their own style or can sleep whenever they want. Besides, living alone cause an improvement to their independent skills.
In conclusion, I believe that its demerits certainly eclipse its advantages. If a person wants to live an independent life, then he/she should understand their family duties.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, then, while, as to, in addition, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11501597444 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6293017426 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581469648562 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.0417457803 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.2631578947 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4736842105 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84210526316 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262384560268 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844931662153 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657745805227 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145278259211 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755740587024 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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