Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is true that living in a foreign country may cause both social and practical problems. However, I partially agree with this statement.
I agree in a sense that, allocating to a new country, leaving behind a life once lived, might cause social and practical problems. Because, First, learning a new language can be difficult for most people, which results in feeling left-out in places like public gatherings, where the mother tongue is usually spoken. Second, as an outsider, one may be unaware of the go-to spots, for example, where to get books on budget. Finally, Being homesick becomes second nature for most people, thus adding more complications to an already hard step.
However, I do disagree to some extent, because most of these serious problems can be dealt with in a proper manner, if the person is willing. Making new friends is a great way of learning the language as well as getting all the information and the insights of that particular area.If, for some reason, an individual is unable to make new friends, they can still make use of the internet, where they have many different applications, like Translator, TripAdvisor and so on. Furthermore, traveling back home regularly, bringing back some food and items that remind you of home, is an ideal way of dealing with the drawbacks of moving to a new country.
In conclusion, going to live abroad is a brave step to take,a lot of difficulties will be faced, particularly in a country where you do not speak the local language, but every problem has a solution, all these problems can be tackled as long as the person is able. the best thing to do is to make new friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, so, still, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, mind you, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79298245614 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67759533432 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.273918213 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.181818182 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9090909091 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296777494363 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109226832543 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820550293022 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194455369525 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103216598084 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.