Everyone should stay in school until the age of eighteen considering the significance of primary and secondary level education in a learners life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Education is the foundation stone to every civilized society. It not only provides the theoretical knowledge about something but also makes an individual morally and ethically sound. This has led to a belief among masses that due to the importance of literacy, one must surely indulge in educational practices till the late teens. I have a strong agreement about this thought and I will discuss the reasons justifying my viewpoint.
There are numerous factors to put emphasis on this belief. The predominant reason is that the initial education provides a base for the higher studies or the researches to be carried out at major levels. Most of the courses are being taught in the schools including mathematics, science, social studies etcetera. A child can recognize it in his early stage that which subject he likes the most and in which stream he wants to study further. Moreover, if an individual does not want to go for the university level education then the primary and secondary schooling can give him ample knowledge which will be beneficial for him in the latter stage. This can be seen in the initiative taken by the kerela government. In this state the secondary level education is compulsory for everyone due to which the literacy rate of this territory is the highest in India and even a labourer is able to communicate in english easily.
In addition to this, studying till eighteen not only enriches the brain with useful information, but also teaches an individual how to be disciplined which further helps children to avoid the indulgence in bad activities. By disciplined, it means that a person becomes punctual. A pupil will get aware about the importance of time in life. Moreover, children can learn how to prioritize their tasks and how much resources are needed to be allocated to them, which can help them to complete their important work early and with more efficiency. This can also be interpreted as time management. The younger generation can have more sense of responsibility and will get to know their civil duties toward their community which will help government in eradicating the unethical and criminal mindset.
In the conclusion, it can be said that the relationship between the smooth functioning of the society is directly proportional to how much its masses are mentally and morally sound and education is the biggest path to create this soundness among the individuals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'studies'' or 'study's'?
Suggestion: studies'; study's
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, so, then, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2020.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03740648379 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83062057827 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5536159601 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 648.9 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.7310106156 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.222222222 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2777777778 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0750970239538 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0239611093466 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032661032481 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0419005770624 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326636365241 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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