A lot of students from the developing countries are moving towards the western countries for higher education. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this migration?
Migration from one country to another has brought about many changes in the lives of humans. Huge influx of people migrates from the developing countries annually especially for attaining higher education in order to provide a better living for the future generation. It definitely has its advantages and disadvantages which I will discuss in this essay.
Many factors are involved which tends to provoke the young generation to head towards the developed countries for higher education. Political and economic impact, lack of standard education, human rights violation, social insecurity and low standard of living may cause people from developing countries to migrate for better opportunities. Moving to a developed country for higher education provides a better grooming of the personality which cannot be achieved in a third world country. Migrants would indulge in different activities which would be beneficial of having substantial growth in career. The level of education in a developed country is designed to promote ethics, hard work and sense of responsibility whereas violation of laws suppresses all these factors in a developing country.
Few disadvantages are also related to this migration to the developed countries. These migrants usually do not get an opportunity to go back to their countries or revive with their elder ones because they are lost in the fast life, striving hard to earn a living. Another disadvantage is the security issue of the locals in the West. A feeling of insecurity is developed among the citizens because of the huge number of migrants entering their country.
Migration is a continuous process where people would leave their land to find peace and prosperity regardless of its disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, third, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41025641026 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96055912006 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567765567766 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8013266125 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.615384615 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53846153846 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382696168308 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130171319 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873552546698 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201497142766 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124409614996 0.056905535591 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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