Some people believe that college students should consider only their own talents and interests when choosing a field of study. Others believe that college students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.Writ

If you follow your heart you will succeed. This phrase is not much reliable nowadays by some people who believe that you need to consider the carreer prospects. However, for me, people have their own talents or gifts which they can take advantage of when choosing a carreer, because happiness depends on what you like and if you are talented in doing something, you will do your best.

To begin with, parents always want to their children are the best, they tell us how we need to go in life according to their own experience, sometimes they are right. For instance, when I was 12 years old, I was really sad because my girlfriend had left me, and I asked for a piece of advice to my mother, she helped and cheered me a lot to overcome that situation. This how parents’ advice sometimes is necessary to do well in life. But, this does not always work, another example to illustrate this point in another prespective is when I was playing with my band, and my mom told me that I should stop playing to much and focus on my studies. I went away from playing music for a while and then I realized how she had influenced on me to leave what I liked the most and what I was talented in.

Second, it is common knowledge that people who go into science areas have an assured future because of the great salary that they will suppose to receive. One contrast example is my aunt’s. She is a nano engineer, but she can’t get a job yet. So, she is really dissapointed for having followed a too large carreer which she did not want to follow and which is not giving her money until now. This clearly explains how some professional do not have job availability as well. On the other hand, carreers you are talented in can make you happy since the beginning until the end of your life.

To sum up, I really consider that talents are the best option that could choose to follow your career pathway, money or what your parents say are not always connected with your success.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If you follow your heart you will succeed....
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Line 3, column 397, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: is sometimes
...ituation. This how parents' advice sometimes is necessary to do well in life. But, this...
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Line 3, column 618, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
... mom told me that I should stop playing to much and focus on my studies. I went aw...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, really, second, so, then, well, while, for instance, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 33.0505617978 194% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 364.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4532967033 5.05705443957 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40098416755 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53021978022 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3495857891 60.3974514979 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.066666667 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2666666667 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 5.21951772744 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107488223111 0.243740707755 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0367466109152 0.0831039109588 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365782088637 0.0758088955206 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0659266398966 0.150359130593 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276548130466 0.0667264976115 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 48.8420337079 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 12.1639044944 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 100.480337079 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.


Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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