You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
Dear Tom,
It was pleasure to hear from you as always. First of all, please accept my congratulations for completing a university degree with ‘A’ grade. I am confident that this achievement will drive you towards eloquent and dazzling career.
In the letter, you asked me to advise you to choose the college or job. At this point of time, this is certainly a big decision for you. I have tried myself to put in your condition and in ponder that it will make more sense to join a job for following reasons.
Firstly, you don’t want to be dependent on you parents and starting job will provide you financial stability and independence. Secondly, since you want to pursue to master in business administration from premier institutes such as Harvard, oxford etc. , the on job experience will further strengthen your case for getting admission in these universities.
I hope that I clarified my thought process and it should help you to arrive on best alternative for your future.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Love,
Takila
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Tom, It was pleasure to hear from you as alwa...
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Line 2, column 61, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
... It was pleasure to hear from you as always. First of all, please accept my congrat...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 257, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... institutes such as Harvard, oxford etc. , the on job experience will further stre...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 880.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89502683511 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.676136363636 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1981494147 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 4.34317383033 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339427585842 0.216113520407 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118998843008 0.0766984524023 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087484116433 0.0603063233224 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177667943237 0.12726935374 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713397255489 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.