some people believe that unpaid community services should be compulsory part of high school praogrammes.
T what extend do you agree or disagree?
It has been suggested that high school students should be involved in unpaid community services as a compulsory part of high school programmes.Most of colleges are already providing opportunities to gain work experience,however these are not compulsory.In my opinion,sending students to work in community services is a good idea at it can provide them with many lots of valuable skills.
Life skills are very important and by doing voluntary work,students can learn how to communicate with others and work in a team but also how to manage their time and improve their organisational skills.Nowadays,unfortunately,teenagers do not have many after_school activities.After_school clubs are no longer that popular and students mostly go home and sit in front of the TV,browse internet or play video games.
By giving them compulsory work activities with charitable or community organisations,they will be encouraged to do something more creative.Skills gained through compulsory work will not only be an assent on their CV but also increase their employability.Studendts will also gain more respect towards work and money as they will realise that it is not that easy to earn them and hopefully will learn to spend them in a more practical way.
Healthy life balance and exercise are promoted by NHS,and therefore any kind of spare time charity work will prevent from sitting and doing nothing,It could possibly reduce the crime level in high school age group.If students have activities to do,they will not bored and come up with silly ideas which can be dangerous for them or their surroundings.
In conclusion,I think this is a very good idea,and I hope this programme will be put into action for high school/collages shortly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, i think, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34306569343 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.00719955203 2.80592935109 143% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587591240876 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 20.2975951904 266% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.469181223 49.4020404114 224% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 292.8 106.682146367 274% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.8 20.7667163134 264% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.0 7.06120827912 241% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186358736557 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109250533892 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682282490611 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109250533892 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682282490611 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.1 13.0946893788 238% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 16.67 50.2224549098 33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.4 11.3001002004 216% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.58 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 32.0 9.78957915832 327% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.6 10.1190380762 233% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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