TPO 21 - Integrated Writing
The reading claims that genetically modified trees can bring a number of advantages and benefits in the future. However, the lecturer finds all the ideas dubious and presents some evidences to refute them all.
The author argues that genetically modified trees are designed to have more strength over nature trees and it means they will survive longer than their unmodified counterparts. conversely, the lecturer brings up the idea that the present nature trees are the ones that were survived all the harsh conditions. Whereas genetically modified trees can't tolerate and survive when climate changes or new pest is used.
Furthermore,the reading passage holds the view that genetically modified trees will bring economic benefits for those that grow them. On the contrary, professor underlines the fact that the people that grow them, can use their seeds to grow and cultivate them again and they should buy its seed from producers. Hence, it will not helps economic growth.
Finally, the reading asserts that the utilization of genetically modified trees can prevent overexploitation of wild trees. In contrast, the speaker dismisses this issue due to the fact that these kind of trees can damage wild trees as they become more aggressive and outcompete wilder trees for nutrient. The genetically modified trees tend to use more water, sunlight and nutrients for their growth so it makes circumstances difficult for wild trees to growh.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 177, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Conversely
...ger than their unmodified counterparts. conversely, the lecturer brings up the idea that t...
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Line 2, column 344, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ons. Whereas genetically modified trees cant tolerate and survive when climate chang...
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Line 3, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...anges or new pest is used. Furthermore,the reading passage holds the view that gen...
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Line 3, column 331, Rule ID: DONT_NEEDS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'help'?
Suggestion: help
...seed from producers. Hence, it will not helps economic growth. Finally, the reading ...
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Line 3, column 331, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...seed from producers. Hence, it will not helps economic growth. Finally, the reading ...
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Line 4, column 191, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...smisses this issue due to the fact that these kind of trees can damage wild trees as they ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, finally, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, whereas, in contrast, kind of, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.4613686534 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 22.412803532 120% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 16.0 30.3222958057 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1216.0 1373.03311258 89% => OK
No of words: 229.0 270.72406181 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31004366812 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68236039758 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 145.348785872 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576419213974 0.540411800872 107% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 419.366225166 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0800851189 49.2860985944 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.545454545 110.228320801 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8181818182 21.698381199 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.06452816374 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.509279081551 0.272083759551 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.209780960196 0.0996497079465 211% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122773879748 0.0662205650399 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.303073320547 0.162205337803 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0929840295822 0.0443174109184 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.3589403974 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.8541721854 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.2367328918 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 63.6247240618 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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