Arctic deer live on islands of Canada's arctic region . Author states that decrease in deer population is due to global warming and it is supported by local hunters.
The deterioration of deer population was stated by indigenous hunters , we can not decide on basing of this survey alone
it may be invalid there are no statistical data. Inspite local hunters are reason for reduction of deer population , they might hunted deer and this may be a reason.we cannot completely base on there reports.
animals have a tendency to adopt to the situation they change with environment , when ice melts they can't shift to other place but the food available in their region is sufficient enough for them to survive , there are also other animals who relay on nature and if their population doesn't vary it may not even effect deer also.
The predators population may risen and this may be a reason for reducing deer density , there may a another assumption that if hunters are misleading us and trapping all deer ,or else deer are migrating to other regions which is assumed by hunters as deer population reduced.
In conclusion , author stated assumptions alone are not sufficient to conclude.
- On Balmer Island, where mopeds serve as a popular form of transportation, the population increases to 100,000 during the summer months. To reduce the number of accidents involving mopeds and pedestrians, the town council of Balmer Island should limit the 33
- 1.Arctic deer live on islands in Canada's arctic regions. They search for food by moving over ice from island to island during the course of the year. Their habitat is limited to areas warm enough to sustain the plants on which they feed and cold enough, 33
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.6327345309 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 13.6137724551 37% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 28.8173652695 59% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 55.5748502994 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 16.3942115768 67% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 2260.96107784 44% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 199.0 441.139720559 45% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94974874372 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 4.56307096286 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64137004328 2.78398813304 95% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 204.123752495 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582914572864 0.468620217663 124% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 705.55239521 45% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 19.7664670659 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.8473053892 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.6681070894 57.8364921388 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.714285714 119.503703932 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4285714286 23.324526521 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.70786347227 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.25449101796 400% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187529283955 0.218282227539 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10363303 0.0743258471296 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115307717391 0.0701772020484 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.091402311631 0.128457276422 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832107326526 0.0628817314937 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 14.3799401198 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.3550499002 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.197005988 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.5979740519 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.32208582834 114% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 98.500998004 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 12.3882235529 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.1389221557 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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