In today’s world, different governments and international organisations are confronting many problems to deal with. What is the most pressing problem among them? How can it be taken care of?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in the amount of pollution across all over the countries around the world, be it affluent or impoverished. There are a wide range of factors that accountable for why this is happening. In my opinion, this situation can be remedied, provided some effective measures are taken.
There are a plethora of factors that accounts for this soaring concern. The primary one stems from the fact that pollutant from factories and industries pollute air, land and water at large extent. The waste not only cause various diseases for mankind, but it also has harmful impact on flora and fauna. Another factor which is making the situation worse is the elevation in vehicle on road which has major contribution to contaminate air. Needless to say, all these demerits have far-reaching impact on environment and ecology.
Steps to deal with the problem are many, but the most effective one are not complicated or remote, but practicable and accessible. Firstly, the government has to take firm step against this issue and make stringent rule to alleviate the situation. Moreover, educational awareness about the hazardous impact of pollution could help to curb this vice practice. Only when convergent efforts from all aspects insured, we can expect to see a considerable progress in this regards.
To conclude, dealing with pollution is one of the most prevalent problem faces by almost all countries around the globe today. Nevertheless, the concrete steps discussed above will strengthen the fight against and restrain the growing concern. Its potential impact is indeed too dire to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 436, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'considerable progress'.
Suggestion: considerable progress
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Line 5, column 463, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...xpect to see a considerable progress in this regards. To conclude, dealing with...
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Line 5, column 477, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... considerable progress in this regards. To conclude, dealing with pollution is o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, as to, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 268.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2276119403 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78907614745 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623134328358 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9314654608 50.4703680194 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8666666667 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146335562032 0.242375264174 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440882222065 0.0925447433944 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678263915984 0.071462118173 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939126257736 0.151781067708 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576934079871 0.0609392437508 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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