More and more prisons are being built to house the world’s criminals, and many people believe long-term imprisonment is the answer to solving the crime problem. However, others feel that psychological assistance is what is required.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Crimes are increasing significantly in the modern world at wild pace. Establishments are still unable to cope with this increment and therefore, no compelling moves have been seen. Some school of businesses are advising the former to construct prisons so that society can be nullify from the offenders, while some other oppose this and advocate that no one is born criminal and they feel that psychological support can turn liability into useful assets. Both the views should be scrutinised before coming to the result.
Admittedly, number of serial criminals are increasing and they have made their mind set only to commit crimes. According to the group of surveys in India, 70% of the offenders have repeated the crime for which they had convicted. Hence, for criminals with such behaviour, Imprisonment is the sole solution and longer the time period, more it will be better for society. Further more, criminals can do society work in the prison which will be beneficial for the nation.
However, it is our society that become harsh to individuals, eventually, they turn into offenders. For such type of cases, imprisonment will be inadequate and our law can do justice to them by sending them for probation or recreation centres instead of jails. With such means their actual reasons behind committing can be known and ultimately, they can be corrected by keeping them into their environment. For an illustration, In London, 30% of criminals were send for probation and their results are significant.
Having dwelled on such thoughts, It is cleared that psychological assistance have more benefits and it should be adopted worldwide but serial criminals should be sent to prison.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'sent'.
Suggestion: sent
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, still, therefore, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17883211679 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82326340244 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591240875912 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8939519455 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.153846154 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148002614717 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559727999635 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457534297772 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100983681599 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370659336307 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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