Some people think that employers should not care about the way their employees dress, because what matters is the quality of their work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Modern workplaces are changing abruptly as many rules has been changed which were a parameter of success. From such rules, a biggest change is seen in the dress code as organisations allow their workers to wear the suitable clothes. The parameter has been shifted towards the quality of work instead of their formal dress. While I believe that the dress codes are completely irrelevant in some fields, there are other professions in which their uniform have a huge impact and they should continue to wear.
Admittedly, allowing employees to dress casually has reduced in the stress in the offices which directly increased their outputs. This new positive trend has been adopted by many technology giants such as Google, Facebook etcetera as they encourage their employees to dress in their own ways and ask them to produce work of better quality. Work of outstanding quality and global dominance clearly depicts that the strict dress codes are completely irrelevant in the technology sector.
However, there are some other sectors in which dress codes are completely relevant as their uniform has safety or practical function. Certain professionals such as doctors, nurses, police can be seen clearly from the distance due to their dress and they can be approached easily during the situations of emergency. Moreover their are other fields such as school principals, lawyers have an image of diligence and authority. Dressing in the formal attire will help them to portray this image of trustworthiness.
Having dwelled on such thoughts, I support the trend of relaxed dress code for the workers but it is not not applicable in all the occupations or departments.
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Suggestion: Moreover,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1962962963 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7016963629 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0999962564 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.916666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216584777134 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879952508011 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543429737895 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129387558602 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067506066237 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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