In today's century, the modernity is full of complications and fully understood that it is very sophisticated as well as tangled to handle by a human being. Especially the generation: youngsters, mainly involve in these conspiracies that how to manage and control lives now-a-days. Hence, it is extremely important to contain the capability to hold the plan and maintain it. It has many advantages like: professionalism take huge effort so planing is must, modern people have stand on their personality up to the skies and development for the reputation in a community in a modern lifestyle.
To begin with my point, it always need encouragement to pick up the basic profession but then to develop according to your modern style is basically a challenge, which needs 100% of abilities of a person. Many youngsters are not getting the right path to organize it and in turn, they faced a lot of options, which leads to them in friendly or unfriendly situation. Afterwards, now they are the people who puts their exact planning and just go through the line and reach up to their final destination by simple means of arranging competency.
Next, personality depends on the person thoughts and facts or figures that, how he/she may b manages his/her inner character beautifully, so the modern people must establish a particular type of level of modernity. It states that, being a modern is not too much in to question, perhaps to hold it in a perfect way; is broken by person's attitude, which is really superficial to the character.
Last, but not the least, reputation in a community reflects what type of a person you are, it seems a very positive and negative influence on a modern life because, it challenges person attitude, emerges out in a regular stops. Thus, naming to yourself in a modern life and just stick to it, sounds so easy, while it treating you in a badly manner.
To conclude, youngsters have the major and the most important generation to held up by their decision, because being in a modernity, now you are responsible to even a single movement to initiate any thing regarding your life style. It then completely going in to query and judge by the communication in which you are living. Hence, in my opinion, it is sometimes too complicated too handle or so difficult to manage or organize.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 476, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'stood'.
Suggestion: stood
... so planing is must, modern people have stand on their personality up to the skies an...
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Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'needs'?
Suggestion: needs
...e. To begin with my point, it always need encouragement to pick up the basic prof...
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Line 5, column 298, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a perfect way" with adverb for "perfect"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...much in to question, perhaps to hold it in a perfect way; is broken by persons attitude, which i...
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Line 5, column 329, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
... hold it in a perfect way; is broken by persons attitude, which is really superficial t...
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Line 7, column 66, Rule ID: KIND_OF_A[1]
Message: Don't include 'a' after a classification term. Use simply 'type of'.
Suggestion: type of
...reputation in a community reflects what type of a person you are, it seems a very positiv...
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Line 7, column 334, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('badly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('manner') instead of another adjective.
...ounds so easy, while it treating you in a badly manner. To conclude, youngsters have the ma...
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Line 9, column 196, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'anything'?
Suggestion: anything
...e to even a single movement to initiate any thing regarding your life style. It then comp...
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Line 9, column 380, Rule ID: TOO_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to handle'?
Suggestion: to handle
...pinion, it is sometimes too complicated too handle or so difficult to manage or organize.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, really, regarding, so, then, thus, well, while, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1923.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 396.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85606060606 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93255108771 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.7306738249 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.357142857 100.406767564 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2857142857 20.6045352989 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 5.45110844103 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158774859659 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489002753534 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316710743119 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0846198190169 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027833239842 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.